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A DJINNH - From a Painting by Guenn

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A DJINNH - From a Painting by Guenn

Postby Guenn of Anglamarke » Sun Dec 04, 2011 11:05 pm

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Detail from "THREE DJINNH" A Painting by Guenn Eona Nimue
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Re: A DJINNH - From a Painting by Guenn

Postby jeremyzschau » Thu Dec 08, 2011 3:52 am

Is this the entire image or has the camera cropped it?
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Re: A DJINNH - From a Painting by Guenn

Postby Guenn of Anglamarke » Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:41 am

Hello Jeremy.... No, that's a just a "Detail" or portion of the whole image, here's the whole thing. Hope you like it.... Guenn

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"THREE DJINNH" A painting by Guenn Eona Nimue
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Re: A DJINNH - From a Painting by Guenn

Postby jeremyzschau » Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:30 am

The prophets from the Halo shooter game are an example of a floating hologram on a figure's forehead. The emblems on your characters look like they are attached. A shadow or light reflecting under the emblem will help separate the emblem from the forehead.

Do you have any sketches you can post?

http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/Prophet_of_Truth

Almost everything in the picture is given an equal amount of space which makes it seem flat. Maybe more attention to space by making the picture more flat and graphic or more 3D with a feeling of actual space.

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