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by Attila Levai
Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:54 pm
Forum: Art critique
Topic: a sketch
Replies: 16
Views: 1847

Re: a sketch

Hi Lévai, good to see you again:) You did a great job with this drawing.. [Alan has given good advice] but i'd like to add a tip.. ] If you do a darker shading at the hairline [where the forehead meets the hair] it will make it better in that area. Well done though! -Michelle Thank you :) Okay, tha...
by Attila Levai
Thu Feb 24, 2011 5:19 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: a sketch
Replies: 16
Views: 1847

Re: a sketch

Hi alanminshull, Thanks for your kind comment. I think you are right about the highlight in the pupils. I will add that change to it. I was away for a while because I reinstalled my windows on my machine and so the browser program had the be reinstalled, too. And after a while only that remembered m...
by Attila Levai
Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:08 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: a sketch
Replies: 16
Views: 1847

a sketch

Hi all,

This is a recent sketch about my wife. I did it using a photo because it was a surprise. I wanted to leave it somewhat fresh. What do you think?

LA

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by Attila Levai
Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:49 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73
Replies: 48
Views: 14230

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Hi,

I like the third drawing the most. I think that your figures have a good shape, just maybe the kneeling boy's left thigh is shorter. Just keep on drawing. 8)

la
by Attila Levai
Tue Nov 23, 2010 9:13 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: Critique my work
Replies: 3
Views: 431

Re: Critique my work

Hi,

You are talented, just keep on practicing.

Otherwise it is hard to say more if you just post different links. :wink:

la
by Attila Levai
Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:49 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: a collage of contrast
Replies: 15
Views: 2660

Re: a collage of contrast

It definitely has a color study/origami look to it. Was this an assignment? If so you certainly nailed the contrast part - it's vibrant and to-the-point. Did you think about doing a darker background at any point? Also, dividing the canvas down the middle with two colors, one on either side, might ...
by Attila Levai
Thu Nov 18, 2010 10:34 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: a collage of contrast
Replies: 15
Views: 2660

a collage of contrast

Hi all,

This is a collage that I did lately. The topic is complementary contrast.

I know it might seem daringly simple but after trying to put more stuff on there I had the impression that the composition was already pretty tense the way it is.

What do you think?

la

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by Attila Levai
Thu Nov 18, 2010 7:58 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: Sketch for self portrait
Replies: 3
Views: 1617

Re: Sketch for self portrait

I like the pencil drawing a more.

la
by Attila Levai
Tue Nov 16, 2010 2:49 pm
Forum: Art critique
Topic: any good?
Replies: 14
Views: 1623

Re: any good?

so, i kinda' took your advice and made something that's a little more 'realistic'. i think i failed miserably. :( it's a human figure/portrait, btw. First I think you got me wrong. Even if I said try something more realistic, I really did not mean that you should try to blend the two fields - howev...
by Attila Levai
Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:49 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: New work inspired by Pink Floyd!!
Replies: 4
Views: 806

Re: New work inspired by Pink Floyd!!

I like it :)

Music also gives me inspiration. I listen to a lot of Satriani, but other, too.

la

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