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by Attila Levai
Mon Nov 08, 2010 2:35 pm
Forum: Art critique
Topic: any good?
Replies: 14
Views: 1630

Re: any good?

well, with school projects, everything i make and draw is sort of abstract. i'm not into realistic things. is that a bad thing? should i try drawing realistic things?? I would say, do not abandon abstract, just try also some realistic things. Probably after working through some realistic topics you...
by Attila Levai
Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:36 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: any good?
Replies: 14
Views: 1630

Re: any good?

i'm trying out this creative, artistic side of me. i'd love to have some feedback, please. :mrgreen: Hi, in itself your painting has a decorative feel to it, whatever the topic is. However, if you were really trying out your artistic side and you don't have yet much experience, try also sketches of...
by Attila Levai
Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:17 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: Feurtaventura
Replies: 7
Views: 857

Re: Feurtaventura

I like it, and I think I know what you wanted to show with the empty space. Also I think that maybe there really should not be anything else on the sky. After I thought about it and if I was the one standing on that beach and if I took a photo of this scene I probably would hold my camera not turned...
by Attila Levai
Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:11 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: Adam's creation -- finished version
Replies: 5
Views: 612

Re: Adam's creation -- finished version

Thank you :)
by Attila Levai
Wed Nov 03, 2010 9:30 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: Adam's creation -- finished version
Replies: 5
Views: 612

Re: Adam's creation -- finished version

Levai, in trying to be helpful, I have to say it needs more definition. I can hardly distinguish the hands (a very important part) and it needs more definition in the 'crowd' on the right. It just doesn't seem quite complete ("final"). I hope that helps. I like it so far. :wink: Thank you...
by Attila Levai
Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:50 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: Adam's creation -- finished version
Replies: 5
Views: 612

Adam's creation -- finished version

Hi all

Here is my rethought version of Micel Angelo's Creation of Adam. Now it is the final version. What do you think about it?

la

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by Attila Levai
Mon Nov 01, 2010 10:42 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: the creation of Adam -- a reworking of Michel Angelo's
Replies: 2
Views: 1208

the creation of Adam -- a reworking of Michel Angelo's

Hi all, This piece is my latest color work with acrylic paint... not at all finished yet. I rethought both the color theme and the shading. On the original there is plain daylight, but on this one the God figure is radiating the main light and the sun is just about to rise above the far back horizon...
by Attila Levai
Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:28 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: Latest heART
Replies: 5
Views: 639

Re: Latest heART

It seems to be something nice, but it is too small to really make out more. :(

la
by Attila Levai
Mon Oct 18, 2010 10:06 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: my sketches
Replies: 5
Views: 961

Re: my sketches

Hi,

I had a look at your works :) and welcome in Found Myself, but as it was said above, try to upload one at a time here, and it will be easier to say some thoughts about your work.

la
by Attila Levai
Wed Oct 13, 2010 2:47 am
Forum: Art critique
Topic: how will I titel this one ?
Replies: 17
Views: 2319

Re: how will I titel this one ?

Look up then "soup-ladle", or "ladle" in itself. It is the big spoon they use to serve the soup.

la

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