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Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

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vtbande
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Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby vtbande » Sun Nov 01, 2015 4:56 am

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THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO LOOK AT AND COMMENT ON MY ART. IT IS THE ONE THING WE ALL CAN DO, THAT FITS OUR OWN TASTES AND VISION(LOL). I HAVE MADE SOME GOOD ART FRIENDS ON HERE AND VALUE THIS WEBSITE GREATLY. sorry about the cap lock. just wanted to scream it from the top of the mountain...Peace and Love to you all.
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby Lorena Shiffer » Sat Nov 07, 2015 11:10 am

Hi there, the water movement is lovely, however it seems to lack a focal point. Framing such as a tree or a rock formation would provide a sense of depth, or even an interesting rock within the water creating a rule of thirds focal point.

The tree swing, love it. I wonder if the partial tree on the right was cropped, it would give the swing more emphasis, in its bold simplicity. The partial tree draws the eye towards the right of the photo and away from the focal point of the swing.

You are a strong artist, so I hope you take this as constructive.
Best Wishes,
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby SharsArt » Sun Nov 08, 2015 2:03 am

I'm not a photographer by any stretch... but I do like your work. :D

I'd also have to say that Lorena's suggestions are usually really good, & you might want to give them a lot of weight.

Wishing you much success with all your artistic endeavors! :D
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby vtbande » Sun Nov 08, 2015 5:38 am

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i hope this is better
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby Grandaddyearl » Sun Nov 08, 2015 7:14 pm

Much better and well done. Grandaddyearl
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby Lorena Shiffer » Wed Nov 11, 2015 9:35 pm

How do you perceive the change ? I noticed you zoomed in some. Can you crop the right side, yet keep the full width of the branch holding the tree ? You adjusted the color to have more impact, nice !
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby jack scott » Thu Nov 12, 2015 7:19 am

Nice work, I really like it
" It's only when you are able to free your mind can you hope to expose your soul." Jack Scott
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby artofdarkness » Thu Nov 12, 2015 1:02 pm

Me too! Big perceptual difference between the two versions.
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby vtbande » Fri Nov 13, 2015 3:32 am

ok see I DO LISTEN I hopt this is better
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Re: Thank you all for looking and talking about my art

Postby SharsArt » Fri Nov 13, 2015 4:41 am

I'm liking this one best! Nicely done. :D

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