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Debra Wilcox
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Please critique my sketch

Postby Debra Wilcox » Mon Jan 11, 2016 5:23 am

I am new to art and would like an honest critique. Thank you
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Grandaddyearl
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Re: Please critique my sketch

Postby Grandaddyearl » Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:52 am

Debra, new to art? Nice job! Do you feel slightly less shading above the lips and slightly more shading at the eyes and a better definition of the cheek bone would help? The right eye is higher than the left but maybe accurately represents the model. Perhaps a shading of the neck (less definition) into the dark shading on the left side of the neck and some definition as to where the right side of the neck ends would be worth considering. In general nice piece and keep up the good work. Grandaddyearl
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Re: Please critique my sketch

Postby Michaela » Mon Jan 18, 2016 7:36 am

this looks so good. i love the shape of the lips, and how realistic this sketch looks. you did awesome!
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Re: Please critique my sketch

Postby Percival Vince » Wed Jan 20, 2016 12:13 pm

Wow. That is one helluva great sketch. I find the shadowing really intense and really nice. Great job. Very realistic.
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Re: Please critique my sketch

Postby anthony » Sun Feb 21, 2016 8:50 am

nice expression. Try increasing the contrast. More highlights and more shadows will increase the depth and 'drama' of a piece. I hope you keep posting here - would love to see more.

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Re: Please critique my sketch

Postby quillingart » Tue Mar 29, 2016 8:26 pm

It's so nice Debra, I love her lips and her eyes. I think she is a beautiful women in real life
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