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I'm working on... (need title suggestions)

Postby Naryanna » Wed Jan 23, 2008 1:26 pm

I finished one fallen angel painting yesterday and started the work on a second one.

Any suggestions for the title?

Atm. It looks like that (it's not finished yet):
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Postby Carson Collins » Wed Jan 23, 2008 2:30 pm

Looks like she fell on her ass. Or maybe got kicked in the ass by Yaweh? Maybe you should call it, "Booted out of Heaven."
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Postby lynnielu » Wed Jan 23, 2008 2:32 pm

kick-ass angel
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Postby Naryanna » Wed Jan 23, 2008 2:49 pm

Hm, I actualy like both sugestions titles. :o
Since it will be finished tomorow I have some time to decide. =)
Thanx! :)
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Postby Gary Dee » Wed Jan 23, 2008 3:10 pm

Twiggy with wings?
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Postby Naryanna » Wed Jan 23, 2008 5:37 pm

Where ya got the Twiggy from?

Well, its not yet finished but I'm done for today. Atm it looks like this:
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Postby DrayeArt » Wed Jan 23, 2008 5:40 pm

Lilith Shunned
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Postby CoffeeAndSmokes » Thu Jan 24, 2008 2:07 am

Damn, I am not really good at naming artworks, but I will give it my best shot..

"Weighted wings"
"The anticipated flight but missed hair appointment"
"Angel treading on thin ice"

Now, I envision that she is looking down and anticipating on reaching something, so I presume...

"Reaching for mother earth"
"I need to rest.. because HE is so demanding"
"Soul searching"
"My hair is nearly longer than my arm!"
"Even gout can befall an angel!"
"Dropped pearly-gate keys"


Hmm... she seems to be scratching her bum, but I won't comment on some titles for humouristic reasons because this is not a humour forum. Serious stuff here, really. I will not let this get the better of me. :cry:

Oh well, if you like any of the suggestions, then good for you. If not, then I guess I am not the wiser to becoming a proficient title wizard so I might just stick to plain old humour.

Hehe :D

BTW, Naryanna, very nice proportionate sketching.
You have done well.

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Postby Naryanna » Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:06 am

Tnx Joe. :)

Wow, CoffieAndSmokes, a lot of interesting suggestions there. Thanx! :) And you know, humor is always welcome, even in serious 'situations'. ;)

I didn't finished yet but I did some additional work on wings and shore.
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Postby HoorayForSeymour » Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:22 am

I liked "My hair is nearly longer than my arm!" :lol: But I think a more serious title would fit better.

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