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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby anthony » Fri Nov 26, 2010 8:09 am

I challenge you to having perfect pen lines without cheating with correction fluid or photo manipulation, so all you see on the original is pure pen and paper - like the big boys do!. Then you will be able take 'amateur' off your title. Sorry dude, I have to speak my mind.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:09 am

@anthony, it's okay, no problem. In fact you're right and I appreciate you being honest about my drawings. Only the drawings of Jesus forgiving the kneeling man and last one (the female soldier) I posted are not photo manipulated, these are purely pen and paper.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:12 am

I forgot to mention that the drawing with two Jesus is also pen and paper.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby anthony » Fri Nov 26, 2010 12:01 pm

JAVY73 wrote:Only the drawings of Jesus forgiving the kneeling man and last one (the female soldier) I posted are not photo manipulated, these are purely pen and paper.

Ah yes, the Jesus forgiving the kneeling man is my favourite of these. I wish that I could draw like that.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Fri Dec 03, 2010 2:26 am

I can't believe I drew this ten tears ago!!!!
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This is a fan art for a comic book called Echo.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby Gary Dee » Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:30 am

Me Too. :wink:
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby ericmeikle » Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:59 am

In my humble opinion you have a real talent for drawing, so why not forget the enhancements. you have a wonderful gift on its own. So use it and develop as an artist set aside the micro chip. E.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby Gary Dee » Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:14 am

ericmeikle wrote:In my humble opinion you have a real talent for drawing, so why not forget the enhancements. you have a wonderful gift on its own. So use it and develop as an artist set aside the micro chip. E.

Beautifully stated, Eric! :D
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Fri Dec 10, 2010 3:09 pm

Thanks for the feed guys! Here's another drawing I did this morning, just to see if I can draw realistically.
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I did not draw the nose right, maybe It's because my priority is to draw Manga style. What do you think?
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby anthony » Fri Dec 10, 2010 6:41 pm

the nose is okay, but the beard-line might be done so it does not look just like a line across his face. However I think that it is your style - colour would change that probably . . .
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