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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:13 am
by Gary Dee
JAVY73 wrote:Here's another drawing I did this morning,

Really......... Free hand? No erasing? Quite extraordinary.

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 5:29 pm
by Shaun Kennedy
Your line work is very good and the images are very prevalent. How must did you have to draw to get that good?

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:07 pm
by JAVY73
@ Gary Dee, I don't like how the nose looks. I've been tempted to erase and even use corrective paper, but thanks anyway.

@Shaun Kennedy, Thanks. I've been drawing Manga for years and this is the first time I attempt to draw realistically but I prefer Manga.

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 3:55 am
by JAVY73
Trying to draw manga as realistic as possible:
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But I did not draw the lips of the bottom right woman correctly. :x

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:39 pm
by Shaun Kennedy
having experienced Manga both drawing, reading, and watching. and having many books on drawing it and of its art work. i think you did fantastic. i think you did the lips good depending on the expression you are trying to get. looks to me that she has a dower expression or maybe annoyed.

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 8:35 pm
by JAVY73
Here is another drawing.
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Critiques are welcome.

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:40 pm
by Tracie Skarbo
Great job!

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:21 pm
by Debbie Adams
ericmeikle wrote:In my humble opinion you have a real talent for drawing, so why not forget the enhancements. you have a wonderful gift on its own. So use it and develop as an artist set aside the micro chip. E.

Yes, forget the photo fix. Just go with your raw talent. You have plenty of it.

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:33 pm
by JAVY73
Thanks for the advice, here's another drawing I did today:
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Hope you like it.

Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:43 pm
by anthony
this sketch is very well drawn. Good posture. A very good start.