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Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

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Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

Postby kenpodad » Sun May 29, 2011 2:48 pm

This is my second spraypaint paintind, I would really like some critique on this. Thanks.
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Gary Dee
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Re: Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

Postby Gary Dee » Mon May 30, 2011 5:15 pm

I believe you have way too much stuff going on with nothing on which to really focus. :shock:
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Re: Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

Postby kenpodad » Tue May 31, 2011 8:50 am

Hello Gary,Your critique of space painting is right on. I was thinking the same thing after I posted the painting. Thanks.
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Re: Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

Postby kilop0y » Tue May 31, 2011 12:55 pm

Wonderful eye candy, it's definitely relevant to my interests, and the planets are actually circles(unlike mine.) Well done.
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Re: Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

Postby Gary Dee » Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:01 am

kenpodad wrote:Hello Gary,Your critique of space painting is right on. I was thinking the same thing after I posted the painting. Thanks.

Thanks for being a good sport about it, Ken. Honesty is the best policy in Art Critique. I know you understand that "Its really nice!" doesn't help anyone.
I like 'outer-space' paintings. Have done a few myself. Technically, I think you're a quite competent painter.......my hat is off to you for your talent with the 'spray-paint' medium........it isn't an easy one! 8)
I'm looking forward to seeing where you go from here! (maybe a little more 'space' in outer-space) :wink: Be sure to post another, Brother.
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Re: Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

Postby Carson Collins » Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:15 am

:lol: HA HA HA HA, yes,
maybe a little more 'space' in outer-space
- Wingo
that's exactly what I thought; couldn't have put it any better. With composition the way the eye of the viewer moves about is of paramount importance. When I look at this one, my eyeballs bounce around like an old electro-mechanical pinball machine. Not a pleasant feeling, although it might work as wallpaper in a little kid's bedroom. :idea:
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Re: Space painting on 16x20 posterboard.

Postby timothyhudgins » Wed Jun 01, 2011 10:35 am

Hey...really cool effects you have created here. Yes, it may be a little busy, but very interesting none the less.

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