A Poem that's nice.

[Tom]

Title: Ooh Aah.

Clouds of laughter surround green fields of thin hush,
The view is quite pleasant from any angle,
when not in a rush,
Time is forgotten in this land of ease,
Tenderness waves happily,
from breezy, meek trees...
...just growing,
Just showing,
that time if given a chance,
brings patient dreams come true,
A chance desire springs forth and seems to smile.

[LykkeHjerte]

Lovely poem I have enjoyed your poem

[Michaela]

I really enjoyed the flow of this poem, as I was reading i imagined being in a nice field of grass. Lovely

[Ozias]

Very lovely Tom.

[AnneHoll]

Very beautiful verse. I also sometimes write for https://homeworkfor.me/ .