A Poem that's nice.

"When you are old and gray and full of sleep, and nodding by the fire, take down this book and slowly read, and dream of the soft look your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep."
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Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:16 am  

Title: Ooh Aah.

Clouds of laughter surround green fields of thin hush,
The view is quite pleasant from any angle,
when not in a rush,
Time is forgotten in this land of ease,
Tenderness waves happily,
from breezy, meek trees...
...just growing,
Just showing,
that time if given a chance,
brings patient dreams come true,
A chance desire springs forth and seems to smile.

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Tue Jan 05, 2016 7:13 am  

Lovely poem I have enjoyed your poem :D

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Mon Feb 15, 2016 7:37 am  

I really enjoyed the flow of this poem, as I was reading i imagined being in a nice field of grass. Lovely :)

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Wed Nov 23, 2016 10:48 pm  

Very lovely Tom.

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Wed Jan 02, 2019 5:47 am  

Very beautiful verse. I also sometimes write for https://homeworkfor.me/ .

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