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A Poem that's nice.

Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:16 am
by Tom
Title: Ooh Aah.

Clouds of laughter surround green fields of thin hush,
The view is quite pleasant from any angle,
when not in a rush,
Time is forgotten in this land of ease,
Tenderness waves happily,
from breezy, meek trees...
...just growing,
Just showing,
that time if given a chance,
brings patient dreams come true,
A chance desire springs forth and seems to smile.

Re: A Poem that's nice.

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2016 7:13 am
by LykkeHjerte
Lovely poem I have enjoyed your poem :D

Re: A Poem that's nice.

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 7:37 am
by Michaela
I really enjoyed the flow of this poem, as I was reading i imagined being in a nice field of grass. Lovely :)

Re: A Poem that's nice.

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2016 10:48 pm
by Ozias
Very lovely Tom.

Re: A Poem that's nice.

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2019 5:47 am
by AnneHoll
Very beautiful verse. I also sometimes write for https://homeworkfor.me/ .