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The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby Gary Dee » Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:13 am

JAVY73 wrote:Here's another drawing I did this morning,

Really......... Free hand? No erasing? Quite extraordinary.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby Shaun Kennedy » Sat Dec 11, 2010 5:29 pm

Your line work is very good and the images are very prevalent. How must did you have to draw to get that good?
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:07 pm

@ Gary Dee, I don't like how the nose looks. I've been tempted to erase and even use corrective paper, but thanks anyway.

@Shaun Kennedy, Thanks. I've been drawing Manga for years and this is the first time I attempt to draw realistically but I prefer Manga.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Sun Jan 09, 2011 3:55 am

Trying to draw manga as realistic as possible:
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But I did not draw the lips of the bottom right woman correctly. :x
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby Shaun Kennedy » Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:39 pm

having experienced Manga both drawing, reading, and watching. and having many books on drawing it and of its art work. i think you did fantastic. i think you did the lips good depending on the expression you are trying to get. looks to me that she has a dower expression or maybe annoyed.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Fri Jan 14, 2011 8:35 pm

Here is another drawing.
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Critiques are welcome.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby Tracie Skarbo » Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:40 pm

Great job!
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby Debbie Adams » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:21 pm

ericmeikle wrote:In my humble opinion you have a real talent for drawing, so why not forget the enhancements. you have a wonderful gift on its own. So use it and develop as an artist set aside the micro chip. E.

Yes, forget the photo fix. Just go with your raw talent. You have plenty of it.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby JAVY73 » Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:33 pm

Thanks for the advice, here's another drawing I did today:
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Hope you like it.
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Re: The amateur Manga art of JAVY73

Postby anthony » Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:43 pm

this sketch is very well drawn. Good posture. A very good start.
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