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Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby JMO621 » Sun Apr 21, 2013 3:06 pm

Hello, here I have a watercolor piece that is in process. I was almost done until I messed up the grass (there were little details and flowers in it). To me, it just doesn't seem "finished" enough, though I admit I never want to call my art complete. What do you think it needs, if anything? How can I go about it? I'm fairly new to watercolors. Thank you! :D
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby bloodjelly » Sun Apr 21, 2013 3:41 pm

Do you have a link to it?
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby JMO621 » Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:15 pm

I forgot to attach it. It should be there now!
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby tulabstract » Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:06 am

I feel it just needs several different colors of green, as it looks abstract..adding more define grass like would draw just to the grass.
I think it will look finished with just different shades of green
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby JMO621 » Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:32 am

Okay, great! I just seem to be afraid to add more color...a bit shy sometimes. :wink: So, it would be fine to add several shades of green? I'll assume layering different colors may work as opposed to just gradating one color and then some.
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby sue hazelton » Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:46 am

I agree layering shades of green would keep with the rythm you have going already in the piece, especially the sky. What I see is the foundation you have already; starting at the right I see your lightest pale green value, then light yellow green value, your medium green value, and your darkest blue green value. Maybe these just need to built up
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby pedrolopes » Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:13 am

I still see a lot of "pale" almost unpainted spaces on the grass section, I'm always obsessed with shades, for me I always have "the brightness, the real color and the darkness", basically three tones for the same color. :idea:
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby JMO621 » Thu Apr 25, 2013 12:45 pm

Thanks for the advice. I did try to add some more layers of color, though I must've put too much water layers because the paper is now buckling (even after taping and stapling :P). I tried compensating by adding darker textured grasses in it. I will post a pic later on.
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby JMO621 » Thu Apr 25, 2013 4:49 pm

Attempt at fixing...
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Here is my update!
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Re: Watercolor Piece-Need help and opinions!

Postby ArlanderSattler » Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:09 am

Hey that's quite a change with the grass :) Well done with the layering. May I suggest you add a little bit more boldness for the sky too? Also, I read about your initial idea to put extra flower details on top the grass, to me it seems to be best leave the grass as it is now though :?

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