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Little Egret Mixed Media

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arthur smart
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Little Egret Mixed Media

Postby arthur smart » Mon Feb 20, 2017 9:34 am

Once again, any thoughts appreciated. Cheers
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Re: Little Egret Mixed Media

Postby Gozza53 » Fri Apr 21, 2017 8:20 am

Just thought I'd comment since I'm a bird nut!
I like the idea of the rapid-sketch feel because it shows a certain energy. The composition is fine too. Where I would suggest improvement would be on developing a sense of depth so that the rushes become less dominant (become less well-defined) and the egret becomes the focus. To do this I would darken the area where rushes meet water (both elements), blur the rushes and soft belnd the water, and give more definition to the bird by using lighter and darker shading on its plumage. I might also introduce some sparkle in the water. Nothing major, just a hint of reflected light.
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Re: Little Egret Mixed Media

Postby arthur smart » Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:32 am

Thanks for pointers. Water always tricky !..... sort of getting there wth acrylics but finding using pencils/pastels more challenging. As for depth, now it's been highlighted I can see your point quite clearly. It's this kind of feedback I find so useful. Thank you.
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Re: Little Egret Mixed Media

Postby anthony » Wed Apr 26, 2017 5:55 pm

I think with the water, Arthur, you are mostly there. As said just a few more touches will make it all jump out 3 dimensionally and spatially.

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