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New fractal plus piece

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Jeremusic
New fractal plus piece

Postby Jeremusic » Thu Sep 18, 2003 6:48 am

CHeck out this piece and let me know what you think please....
Moonview by Jeremusic
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Postby bloodjelly » Thu Sep 18, 2003 10:06 am

Whoops - you have to be a member (and logged in) to upload images. I see you've registered. Why don't you try again?
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Postby Sunny » Thu Sep 18, 2003 1:31 pm

Looking forward to seeing it-please? :D
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Postby Jeremusic » Fri Sep 19, 2003 8:04 am

Well ok , here it is!Image
All the best!

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Postby bloodjelly » Fri Sep 19, 2003 8:12 am

Hi Jeremusic, welcome to the site. :D The tangle of lines and colors in the foreground looks kind of like an alien. I like the subtlety of the water drops and the background creates a nice atmosphere. My only critique is that there's no real focus. Everything in the composition seems to have equal weight. What program did you use to create this? Bryce? Look forward to seeing some more of your work.
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Postby bonejob » Sat Sep 20, 2003 6:37 pm

love the use of complimentry colors and effect. but it just seems to much of a jumble and thrown together, like a giant cosmic bowl of spaghetti, mmmm spaghetti. anyways are just learning the program you used to make that? because it shows some good promise. keep at it.
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Postby CoffeeAndSmokes » Sun Sep 21, 2003 12:25 am

Hi jeremusic & welcome :D

Very overpowering, in fact too overpowering to make any sense of it all. Maybe the image enhancement should be smaller to enhance the background images might help.
It was only when I read the title of your work was I to notice any relevance to what the subject was about.
Nice to see a bit of imagination there.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work....

C & S :D
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Postby brnystrdy » Sun Sep 21, 2003 9:47 am

I like this. It makes me feel like I am inside the lines and structure looking at the moonscape. Possibly, that the viewer is the creature admiring the earthrise.

Looking forward to more.

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Postby Guest » Tue Sep 23, 2003 5:12 am

Dear all, thanks for your viewpoints, and ideas, I'll bear them in mind for the next piece. :-)

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